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August 26 2008
An anti-hot dog commercial from a vegetarian group runs afoul of, oh, the truth. Here’s the story, from the Associated Press via MSNBC.com:
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Hmpf. I’m happily omnivorous, and I could easily beat that lame effort as an anti-meat spot. Trying to paint hot dogs with the taint of childhood colon cancer is not only fallacious, it’s also absurd. For most normal people, hot dogs are in the category of junk-like quasi-real foods, like Spam, beef jerky, or pepperoni. Yes, the fat load and the salt load and possibly the chemical load are high; that’s why they’re not part of a normal person’s regular diet. As for the half-dozen or so hot dogs my kids eat each year at birthday parties and campouts – as a concerned parent I’d say the memories outweigh the risk. As a marketing guy, I’d say if you want to go gunning for a meat target, go for the category leaders: chicken, beef, pork.

And as for an anti-hot dog ad, you know what I’d have done? Told the truth about them, like the article did: “the government does allow them to contain pig snouts and stomachs, cow lips and livers, goat gullets and lamb spleens.

As anti-hot dog copy, that’s hard to top.

The ad would have been a lot stronger and swayed more people, if the group behind it had stayed focused and dug deeper.
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August 25 2008
Here’s some refreshing straight talk about award shows from Eric Hirshberg, an award-winning creative director and frequent advertising award show judge, in Crain’s Creativity (NY):
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Heck, I’d be happy if ads submitted to award shows had to be accompanied by proof they were actually commissioned by a paying client and run in real media. Yeah, there’s enough wriggle room there to allow some fake ads, but at least it would screen out the pure-play fake ads, the ones created just for the shows and tailored specifically to the tastes of ad award show judges.

Anyway, I agree with everything Mr. Hirshberg says, right down to his ultimate advertising award show concept. My only regret would be that it eliminates the opportunity to salute – and learn from – the spectacularly innovative marketplace dogs, which play their own important role in pushing us along.
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August 22 2008
Here is a significant advertising success story out of Montana, where up until this ad campaign broke a couple years ago, the state was battling a severe meth problem among kids. Here’s the story, from BBC News:
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The disciplined approach to “un-selling” meth use was spot on; lifestyle choices including drug use are about image, branding, and perception. Also, I like the pre-emptive approach of  “not even once.”

But the thing to learn from this campaign, is this: because it was privately funded, it was sustained for two straight years, something few public agencies have the freedom to do. Most of the time, you’d barely get a campaign started when it was time to send out RFPs and go through the whole qualification and proposal process again, a colossal waste of time, energy, and awareness.

Yes, the graphic images helped. Yes, the high level of production quality helped. Yes, the media budget helped. But the biggest contributor to the success of this campaign – and it was successful, slashing meth use in the state by more than half – was the strategic commitment to keep hammering away for two solid years.
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August 21 2008
I have two today. First up is this one, about owners of creative copyrights moving to embrace – and possibly legitimize – YouTube pirates, from CRM Daily (Woodland Hills, CA):
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The main thing is, the original copyright owner gets the revenue from the advertising, if any, and gets to place an ad of its own in the form of a credit line.

This strikes me as a pragmatic solution to a real issue, especially when the “pirates” are merely enthusiastic fans. And, as for real intellectual property pirates, the revenue gets siphoned off so there’s no incentive.

My next story is related to intellectual property and trademark law. A recent trademark decision in Hong Kong turned down Rolex’s argument that Seiko’s Roox sub-brand was an infringement. Here’s a PDF of the decision, well worth a read in part because the registrar, the delightfully named Ms. Fanny Shuk Fan Pang, had marketing insight, common sense, and a wry sense of humor:
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Of note: the designer, Ryoichi Kishi, submitted his rationale for the name and the logo design as a statutory declaration, and that became, in the absence of directly questioning him, a key piece of evidence for independent creation of the mark.

Also of note: the registrar took into account the two company’s branding efforts, noting that the positioning disparity made consumer confusion all but impossible.

So, it’s an interesting inside look at how the legal system works, even globally. Personally, I think the outcome of the conflict was never really in doubt, but it was something Rolex had to pursue to protect its turf. The next watch company to think of doing, oh, Rimix or Rohox or even a real word like Relax might think twice about it, especially if it lacked the resources of Seiko (which by the way, is the goliath in this case). And that was the point Rolex needed to make, and it made it by being scrappy and forcing the issue as far as it did.
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August 20 2008
As the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing draw to a close, London is ramping up its 2012 effort. And here is a preview of the thin end of the upcoming advertising wedge, from BBC News:
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Umm-hmm. The first thing that poster brings to my mind is the title sequence of EastEnders, the popular British soap opera. The second and more important impression, is that it looks more like a fisheye aerial view of London, not London-as-Earth. Yeah, the art director tried, by putting stars in the background. But it would work better if there was a shadow indicating a day/night terminator or an object in the foreground like the moon or a satellite or something to place me way out in space instead of merely high up in the air.

I also don’t like the words “Visit London” appearing twice. It looks like someone lacked confidence in the branding.

It’s a decent concept, but someone needed to sweat the details a bit more before sending this one to press.
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August 19 2008
Record-setting Olympic gold medalist and swimmer Michael Phelps is the next big celebrity pitchman. The open question is, will he have staying power? Here’s a look at his advertising potential, from the Associated Press via my hometown San Diego Union-Tribune (CA):
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I had shoved into the dim recesses of memory the fact that Mary Lou Retton had won just a single gold medal, so skillfully has she and her handlers parlayed that accomplishment into a lifetime career. I’m of a generation that wouldn’t necessarily dismiss Mark Spitz as an example of an Olympic athlete who lacked staying power in pop culture; it seems he was a major spokesman and celebrity well into the 1980s. The same is true of Olympic decathlete Bruce Jenner. More recently, and considerably closer to home, I was surprised that champion snowboarder and 2006 Winter Games gold medalist Shaun White hasn’t made the transition into mainstream pop culture.

One wonders if there’s a gender gap in play, with female athletes being more bankable over the long run than male athletes. Think of, oh, Mia Hamm, Nadia Comaneci, Olga Korbut, Dorothy Hamill, the list goes on and on, all the way back to Sonja Henie.

From a marketing perspective, though, the brand is the key. It would be hard to attach a single-word attribute to Spitz, Jenner, or, for that matter, White. But almost everyone could ID Mary Lou Retton in a word: “spunky.” As tiresome as that no doubt became, it was key to her success in the world of advertising and pop culture.

So, what is Phelp’s one-word brand? “Best” lacks emotion. “Driven” is better, but lacks the likeable, unexpected hook of  “spunky,” which for those reasons is the Olympic personal brand to beat.
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August 18 2008
To every trend, there is a counter-trend. Call this the micro-brewery backlash - the beers du jour are old-line blue-collar brands like Pabst Blue Ribbon and Schlitz. Here’s the story, from my hometown San Diego Union-Tribune (CA):
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The thing is, this isn’t about nostalgia, although that’s a funny aside for older people. The hip young drinkers choosing PBR wouldn’t identify Father Knows Best as anything but retro-camp, right in there with McHale’s Navy and Sgt. Bilko re-runs on Hulu or Fancast. (And, by the way, and not to take anything away from Tim Conway and Phil Silvers, Joe Flynn and Paul Ford were incredible comedic talents with flawless timing and a gift for the perfect micro-expression.) It’s also not about the beer, although taste preferences are an acquired thing anyway.

What this is about, is a reaction to marketing. And not just mass-marketing, but the kind of precise target marketing done by niche brands – like microbreweries. The consumer group is a subset within the niche that defines itself by rejecting the niche, a rising category if ever there was one. That’s the part that’s important to understand.
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August 17 2008
I’m back from the mountains, where we had perfect weather and a wonderful time!

And, on the long drive home, I saw an example of really smart marketing. It was a crude, hand-painted sign at one end of a nursery next to the freeway. It read:
LANDSCAPING
THAT WILL
SELL HOUSES

Okay, that’s positioning. It also may be careful copywriting. Note, for instance, how it throws the benefit to the future while making the promise explicit: not “landscaping that sells houses” but “landscaping that will sell houses.” Also, note the impersonal plural: “houses” instead of “your house.” So this nursery isn’t targeting individual home-sellers, but banks, mortgage holders, and real estate agents.

The only thing I would add, is a branded URL to close the loop.
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August 7 2008
It looks like the economic stimulus checks have been spent, and retailers are bracing for a tough third quarter and even worse holiday season. Here’s the story, related to the one from yesterday, from MSNBC.com:
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I don’t personally know anyone who spent his or her economic stimulus rebate check on new purchases.

Anyway, if anyone cares, here’s my marketing recommendation for retailers. If you’re going to use loss-leaders to get foot traffic up (yeah, yeah, that’s what everyone’s already doing), then – and this is the critical part that so far most retailers have yet to implement well – use heavy point-of-sale marketing to wring more out of each potential customer once they’re in the store. In a down economy, impulse buying still exists; it’s just that now consumers respond to a different kind of item. For instance, a roll of bargain-priced paper towels instead of a candy bar. Retailers are going to have to work for the sales now.

Speaking of working, I’m taking a little time off to recharge and play with my family. I will be back, refreshed, reloaded, and ready to go!
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August 6 2008
As Back-to-School shopping season opens, retailers are rolling out big discounts and trying all kinds of promotions in an all-out, almost desperate effort to get foot traffic. Here’s the story, from the Associated Press via MSNBC.com:
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The dismal economy and the lack of “must-have” fashion items for kids, to my eye, go hand-in-hand. After all, why spend money to develop and promote a fad if the market for such products is declining? And, on the consumer side, the return to fashion classics reflects the increased importance of getting more use out of what is purchased. If there’s a hot item this year, it’ll be on the accessory front, it’ll be cheap, and kids will buy it for themselves and their friends.

Oh, and it probably won’t be marketed primarily through traditional media, discounting, or promotions.
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August 5 2008
This is sorta kinda a continuation from yesterday’s entry about children’s programming that’s really branded advertising. Here’s the flip side, grown-up advertising that’s really programming, from The Times (UK):
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Like the author points out, branded programming has been around forever. But these are some interesting ways to incorporate brands into lifestyle events like offbeat comedy films, novels, videogames, and web-based entertainment. What I think is interesting, too, is that these efforts typically zero in on just a single facet of the demographic/psychographic make-up of the target consumer. That tight focus part of what makes them work.
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August 4 2008
Here’s one local journalist’s reaction to the launch of a cable channel offering 24-hour children’s programming, from my hometown San Diego Union-Tribune (CA):
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Advertising aimed at children is a hot topic, but few are addressing the more insidious threat of programming that targets children. It’s as if no one wants to address the real problem: children being trained (by “educational” television, naturally) to derive their physical wants and emotional needs from stuff on TV.

See, in my home scenario, there could be no power play for the remote control because neither the parents nor the children seek entertainment by mass media. I went into all this for the umpteenth time on July 30, but it seems like advertising or programming aimed at kids is in the air again, as the summer drags on and parental imaginations are drained of Fun Activities For The Kids.

How about, instead of watching something, doing something? That would probably help with the childhood obesity thing too, with the adult obesity thing thrown in for good measure. All by just turning the TV off.

The only thing that should be 24/7 in a childs’s life, is love.
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August 1 2008
San Diego is a big tourist town. But this year, our tourist season has been weak. Not tanking, but weak. Here’s a story about plans to ramp up regional ads and fire up some free gas promotions, from my hometown newspaper, the San Diego Union-Tribune (CA):
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I hate to take issue with the city’s plans to attract more tourist dollars, since I know some of the people working on ConVis. They’re smart people. I’m pulling for them, and I hope their plans work.

But, um, those people in Phoenix and Las Vegas? They’re worried about losing their jobs, their homes, their health insurance, just like everyone else in America. They aren’t about to fly or drive here this year.

And the staycationers? What part of “vacation at home” is not understood? Yes, locals might go to Sea World or the Zoo. But, more likely, they’ll hang out at Balboa Park (free), or the beach (free) or their local community park (also free). And they’re not booking hotel rooms, which is where the city picks up its transient occupancy tax.

So the whole second-wave plan looks like it was based on boom-time research. You can’t use last year’s data and last year’s plans and expect last year’s results because it’s not last year any more.

What does a little ol’ freelance advertising copywriter think, going forward? Well, I don’t have access to the information the people actually working on the account have. But it seems to me that the big opportunity is overseas, where people can pay for our recession-economy rates with powerful Euros or Pounds or Kroner.

Germany, Great Britain, Scandinavia, those are places where we should put our marketing dollars if there’s enough money left to get a message through. Especially since we can get a second tourist season as winter closes in on northern Europe and we can offer a glorious place where the temperature’s up and the currency’s down.
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July 31 2008
Today’s story is somewhat related to yesterday’s first entry, about the rest of the world’s relationship with the creative industry  Here’s a rant from novelist and writer Russell Smith about the word “content” as applied to what one creates, from The Globe and Mail (Toronto, Ontario, Canada):
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Yeah, well content isn’t the worst pejorative that’s been applied to copy. I can recall art directors dismissing body copy as “gray stuff.” As in, “here’s the space for your gray stuff.”

Some young designers, having cut their teeth on the joke but not necessarily the intimate partnership behind it, have taken to actually designing pieces with copy in gray type, a virtual visual acuity test. That’s not exactly bringing value to the customer.

Anyway, I love the description of developing the media proposal. I have seen reports exactly like this for product launches and ad campaigns. It’s all focused on branding, and while branding is important, it’s equally important to plan a way to deliver that brand to the intended audience one at a time. And for that, you need relevant, fresh, purposeful, characteristic deliverables, whether those are the products themselves or advertising concepts and copy. Otherwise, all you have is window-dressing for an empty store, few return customers, and a death spiral of diminishing returns.

So if, as Smith says, “The idea of media as a vehicle for ‘content’ is a virus,” then at least it’s one that often kills its host.
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July 30 2008
I have two stories today. First up is an insipid (but polite) response in BusinessWeek to a query about how to submit unsolicited advertising ideas to companies or their ad agencies:
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I have a better answer, and it’s right in my FAQ section:

... The typical advertising copywriter or art director routinely develops hundreds of ad concepts before presentation. Most lie crumpled in wastebaskets, including many, many “great” ideas. Some were too obvious, or off-strategy, or presented practical obstacles to proper execution. Or, and this is the most-common reason, those great ideas weren’t so great once they were surrounded by better ideas. It has been said more than once that you can judge the quality of a creative team by the contents of its trash can. Finally, clients routinely reject even “great” ad concepts as part of the selection process. Having a bunch of unsolicited but great ideas for ads - that’s the start of a portfolio, not a presentation. Get a job as an advertising copywriter at an ad agency and get to work....

See, this is where people who don’t make a living as a working artist or designer or copywriter or art director just don’t get it. Although I believe that everyone is creative, innate creativity being one of the things that allowed humans to survive, let alone thrive, ideas are the pocket change of creative professionals. We have them all the time, in countless quantities. Partly because that’s just what we do. And partly because that’s what it takes to get one great ad produced.

So these people cosseting their precious Great Idea For An Ad come off as naive, ignorant, and quite possibly not especially innovative in the first place.

That said, there’s nothing stopping anyone from actually producing their Great Idea For An Ad and posting it to a site like YouTube. Consumer-generated advertising is all over the place; many companies (like Apple, for instance – see my Ad Blog entry for October 26 2007) have picked homemade TV commercials for production, and the very worst that could happen is you get a frosty letter from your would-be client’s legal department requesting that your creation be removed. But there again, the idea isn’t the thing stopping anyone; it’s actually having the discipline and the drive to sit down and do something..

Next, I’m dusting off my faithful old hobby horse again, ranting about advertising aimed at children and the parents who enable it. Here’s a story from the Associated Press, via MSNBC.com, in which actual grown-up journalists and bureaucrats express their concerns about the $1.6 billion spent marketing food to kids:
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All this brings up my standard response: where are the parents? There is absolutely no reason on Earth for a child to watch TV or go online without the parent right there. Why are children allowed to make choices about what the family eats? That’s just nuts, and its also abdicating the responsibility of being a parent.

My sons are now 8 and 6. The younger one knows all the characters in Pirates of the Caribbean. He has never seen the movie. He has never seen a television ad for the action figures or play sets. He has gotten all his information from friends and gifts of themed toys, none of which, by the way, we bought for him. He has also been to the original Pirates of the Caribbean ride at Disneyland. My point being, it doesn’t take a lot of exposure for a kid to be culturally literate within his peer group, so that’s no excuse.

By the way, they also know all the Speed Racer characters. No, not the movie, which they have not seen; we occasionally let them watch one of the original episodes on Hulu, on the computer in the family room. But only with one of us right there in the room to talk about anything they might see, particularly the ads. We also amuse ourselves by letting them watch classic episodes of The Addams Family and the hip German children’s show Wissen Macht Ah! We’re raising kids as peculiar as we are, but that’s beside the point.

What we have never done, because I work in advertising, is bought into the mass-marketed stuff. We never did Baby Einstein, because we didn’t want to train our kids to get their entertainment from TV. We never did Sesame Street or Bob the Builder, both of which struck us as half-hour-long television commercials. Neither of our cars have DVD players, and we regularly pack everyone up for three-hour-long car rides to their grandmother’s house and multi-day road trips. (And what do they do, you ask? They read, or do puzzles, or chat, or gaze out the window. They eavesdrop on the grown-up conversation in the front seats. They pet the dog, if he’s squeezed in between them. Oh yeah, and they fight over who’s taking up more space, more air, more time with that toy or book or whatever.)

What we did do, and still do, is let them plant seeds, water the garden, make mud balls, and have water balloon fights. We spread a long sheet of butcher paper on the floor from the dining room into the family room and let them paint murals and draw mazes and write rows upon rows of numbers. Even during summer break, there’s rarely time for television. We have to schedule movie afternoons.

Out kids spend more time active than passive, more time doing than watching. So the food thing? A non-issue because (a) they don’t watch a lot of TV and what they do watch is monitored and at times discussed, (b) they don’t see fictional characters as being credible pitchmen for food items, and (c) as the parents, my wife and I are firmly in charge of what’s in the pantry and refrigerator.

For more of my thoughts on advertising and kids, see my Ad Blog entries for November 13 2007, October 30, 23, and 18 2007, September 16, 11, and 7 2007, June 1 2007, March 19 2007, February 28 2007, January 15 and 31 2007, December 19 2006, November 14, 17 and 20 2006, October 2, 3 and 27 2006, June 11 and 12 2006, April 4 2006, January 20 2006, November 22 and 30 2005, October 20 2005, June 27 2005, April 14 and 27 2005, March 16 17 and 24 2005, February 17 and 28 2005, December 22 2004, November 15 and 16 2004, June 5 and 7 2004, December 5 2003, November 13 and 21 2003, May 6 2003, and April 16 2003. There may be others.
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July 29 2008
Are ads getting sexier? Maybe. Here’s a report, from ABC News (Philadelphia, PA):
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Yes, sex sells. It has done since before the Roman Empire. The marketing question, is: sells what? Controversy, clothing, or cars? Maybe. A “lifestyle?” Um, no.

I think the Gossip Girl promos are hilarious, self-deprecating in exactly the right way. Yes, they’re sexy, but they’re also funny, which is even more sexy when you get right down to it. The international BMW ad, on the other hand, is obvious, an almost desperate attempt to attract a younger group of wealthy old men to its resale market.

And that’s where the whole matter of sex, as James Thurber and E.B. White put it in Is Sex Necessary? Or, Why You Feel The Way You Do (1929, Harper & Row) goes sideways. Sex in advertising works best as a spice: just a dash is all it takes. When it becomes the entrée, something has gone terribly wrong with the message.

Pulling out my copy of Is Sex Necessary? compels me to share just a short excerpt from the foreword to that refreshing, delightfully sly book:

Our method was the opposite of that used by other writers on sex: we saw clearly in what respect they failed, and we profited by their example. We saw, chiefly, that these writers expended their entire emotional energy in their writing and never had time for anything else. The great length of their books (some of them ran into two volumes and came in a cardboard box) testified to their absorption with the sheer business of writing. They clearly hadn’t been out much. They had been home writing; and meanwhile what was sex doing? Not standing still, you can better believe it.

I think that assessment rings equally true in relation to articles written about sex in advertising. Every generation likes to think it alone invented new things, from viral marketing to sex, when in fact all this hoopla is merely the innocently startled reaction to what was there all along.
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July 28 2008
Two Baltimore ad agency executives defect to form their own agency, taking with them a major account. Happens all the time, all over the world, right? Except this time, the two execs are held liable for a $300,000 jury award to their former employer. Here’s the story, from the Daily Record (Baltimore, MD):
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The details of the case are covered by a protective order, so one is left to wonder what they must have done to get nailed with a judgment against them at all, let alone one into six figures. The evidence must have been very clear, and looked very bad.

It is one thing to leave an ad agency, then compete for accounts that one managed previously. It is another thing entirely to solicit an account for one organization while flying the flag of another. That’s not a gray area; the ethical line is black and white. And, in this case, crossing that line cost a fair chunk of green.
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July 25 2008
Jingles are back! Here’s the story, from Billboard via Yahoo! News:
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Oh boy, oh boy, now I get to point all the way back to my very first Ad Blog entry, more than five years ago, on February 20 2003, when I said:

Jingles were sticky long before the term was applied to web content. I rather suspect their fall from favor has to do with people’s ever-decreasing attention spans - and that applies to advertisers and copywriters as well as those in their target audiences. Who has time to pay attention to a jingle, when an old pop song is instantly recognizable? Still, I think a lot of radio, television, and web advertisers are missing the opportunity to make a savvy investment in their brand, by entrenching - and I mean entrenching - a catchy, well-written jingle. A jingle can deliver a unique sales message in a unique way, on a level that a pre-existing song simply cannot.

I’ve raised these same, contrarian points many times before. A quick root through the Ad Blog archives turns up January 24 2005, February 12 2005, June 24 2005, December 30 2005, June 9 2006, September 26 2006, March 16 2007, November 15 2007, and no doubt some others I’ve missed.

The world (or the tiny piece of it concerned with broadcast advertising) is coming around to my point of view, or at least a point of view that I shared with other equally insightful but relatively scarce advertising people. Now that’s a great way to kick off the weekend!
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July 24 2008
In a depressed (or recessed) economy, many niche retailers are discovering – some the hard way – that service sells. Here’s the story, a long feature, from CRM Today (Woodland Hills, CA):
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Circuit City blew its brand – and its sales – by unloading its most-expensive, most-experienced salespeople. Discounters like Target and Walmart are getting by for now on a commoditized low price, but regularly lose sales when no staff is available on the floor. And when traffic is down, it’s essential to convert as many lookers to buyers as possible - and that last link depends on customer service.

Key quote, from sales expert Robert Richardson:

“As the economy tightens,” Richardson says, “everyone is going to be lowering price to the lowest possible point, so service becomes the most important differentiator between retailers. It’s the reason why a consumer would choose to shop at one over another.”

Customer service is perhaps the most critical step in maintaining the brand. In fact, the customer experience is the brand experience to the only people who count.
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July 23 2008
Viral, Olympics, Olympics, viral. It’s that sort of week. Here’s an article/rant from this week’s MSN Slate about “corporate sponsored Internet pranks” (i.e. viral marketing):
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I think the medium has made the leap from channel to noise when one argues, and in the same breath no less, that the the medium combines assumed fiction (i.e.: lying) with authenticity. Of course, the same thing is true of the Internet itself, but the web has already gone through its search consolidation.

I think the evolution of the reveal as an extension of the viral campaign is interesting. Just a few years ago, staying hidden behind the curtain was critical to success; now, managing the unveiling of corporate sponsorship is just another step in reaching out and engaging potential customers brand-to-person.
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July 22 2008
Sponsors of the Olympic Games are actively looking for ways to extend the value of their sponsorships, and one important channel is social media. Here’s the story, from Mediaweek (NY, NY):
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I think Lenovo has it right, acting as an enabler of communication over social media rather than a corporate participant. The smart bit, is using existing media channels like Facebook, YouTube, and Blogger rather than creating a Lenovo-branded channel. I’ve long advocated owning the channel, but for a short-term project like the Olympic Games, it makes more sense to jump on a bandwagon that’s already rolling. All the content could be rolled up in a Lenovo-branded channel later, if it was determined to have long-term value for the brand.

The problem, from cost-efficiency and media-planning perspectives, is how to measure engagement if not as a function of impressions or clicks or registrations? (And I do think that it’s engagement, not impressions, that has always been the gold-standard metric in all advertising.) That’s the final missing piece on which a lot of media research companies are working.
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July 21 2008
Chinese computer brand Lenovo is betting big on its sponsorship of the Olympic Games in Beijing. Here’s something of a baseline, pre-Games article about their plans and spending, from Adweek:
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The concept of powering the Olympic Games is strong, particularly for a computer maker. The “Ideas” tagline is not as strong, although it has the advantage of being generic enough to fit almost any situation. To me, what makes it weak is the fact that it’s a plural noun instead of a singular verb, like IBM’s classic “Think” or HP’s more-recent “Create.” If you’re going to go for broad and trite, you’d might as well choose a verb at the same price. Imagine (hey, there’s a good verb) IBM using “Thoughts” or HP using “Creations.” Yeah, they fall flat. Or, flatter.

Still, if you throw enough money at a broad and trite tagline, it can start to look like genius when it gains traction.
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July 18 2008
Here’s a good look at stunt marketing as a subset of viral marketing, from the Globe & Mail (Toronto, ONT):
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In reality, spectacular backfires are as scarce as spectacular successes. Most of these efforts launch into limbo, where the ability to disavow them is a part of their attraction to marketers. The Cartoon Network campaign in Boston is a prime example: according to the people responsible, the electronic signboards were up and in place for three weeks before anyone noticed (see February 1 2007). Three weeks. That was a launch into nothingness if ever there was one; if it wasn’t for the bad publicity, there’d have been none at all. As for the Dr. Pepper effort, I wrote about that stunt on February 25 2007. That one backfired largely because of poor planning – it was a good concept with a bad execution.

Anyway, stunt marketing (or ambush marketing) is likely to come further into the limelight as the Olympics draw near. It’ll be interesting to see what, if anything, penetrates the barriers of Chinese authorities, media noise, brand confusion, and consumer cynicism.
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July 17 2008
The sluggish economy has retailers on the ropes. But the smart ones are adjusting their advertising and merchandising to go where the customers are. Here’s the story, from the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette (PA):
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One effect of high gas prices, is that physical comparison shopping has gone down; those people in the store are there to buy. Another effect is the rise of the importance of geographical micro-targeting.

Meanwhile, the advertising message has shifted from major purchases or convenience items to everyday staple items. The smart retailers are probably already adjusting their floor layouts to suit the new economic landscape.

I was just a kid in the mid-1970s, but from here it sure looks like the 70s are back. Whip Inflation Now button, anyone?
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July 16 2008
It’s not often that a major international story has local implications. But the recent purchase of Anheuser-Busch by Belgium-based InBev could put San Diego’s Sea World on the auction block, along with the rest of A-B’s theme park holdings. Here’s the story, from the Associated Press via my hometown San Diego Union-Tribune (CA):
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Unfortunately, with the weak dollar, it’s unlikely that Sea World will remain in American hands. Which means more of our local tourist dollars will flow overseas, in addition to the existing flood of oil dollars. That’s a significant injury for a tourist town like San Diego. And, it could mean more local taxes and fees imposed on the local travel and hospitality industry, since that that could be one way to capture more money from a foreign-owned Sea World.

Anyway, I hope Sea World ownership can stay here in the U.S. I wonder if Disney could pull it off? Now that would be an exciting merger of super brands!
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July 15 2008
In France, protesters are defacing billboards – after calling the police so they can be arrested – in an effort to mobilize the public against advertising in general. Here’s the story, from BBC News:
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Key quote, from Tom Standage, business editor of The Economist:

“You can tell you live in the developed world when the thing you go and protest about is that there are too many advertising billboards... This is a symptom of wealth, and also a symptom of the classic French antipathy towards capitalism.”

Granting the premise that advertising is evil, which I don’t, the protesters here are as guilty as the advertisers, if not more so. And when you go on to read about how public sector workers went on strike in order to retain their advertiser-based funding, for fear of losing their jobs, this whole thing is even more a form of self-promotion than a genuine call for a public dialog. Just one more organization dedicated to stroking its own collective ego.
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July 14 2008
Hey, another one about China, sponsors of the Beijing Olympic Games, human rights, and advertising, this time from the Wall Street Journal:
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I have a couple comments. First, the quandary of having creative teams at cross-purposes is nothing new. It was an integral challenge with the rise of mega-agencies in the 1960s, and it’s still a key issue with the agency and media consolidation of recent years. What’s worth noting, however, is that few other first-world nations would be quite at such odds with such an organization as Amnesty International.

Second, it feeds my own cynicism about awards shows to read that the client, while killing the campaign with good reason, approved the ad to run a single time, for the express purpose of enabling the agency to enter it at Cannes (at which it won a bronze). That ain’t advertising; that’s just fake work; ego gratification at the client’s expense.
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July 11 2008
As expected, it looks like Nike’s major ad campaign based around the Beijing Olympic Games (see July 1) will be severely curtailed or simply cancelled outright by the Chinese government putting pressure on the media companies. Here’s the story, from the New York Times via Yahoo! Finance:
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I don’t know; Nike’s alleged campaign might be more of a straw dog than a real effort. Surely if a simple little ol’ freelance advertising copywriter knew that Chinese government restrictions on media were harsh, arbitrary, and unmoveable as far back as December 31 2003, nearly five years ago, the people at Nike and Nike’s ad agency knew it too. Either that, or – and this is the dangerous bit – Nike found a way to circumvent the official sponsor, Adidas, through official channels.

You know, they execute businesspeople over there for stuff like this.
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July 10 2008
Here’s a follow-up to my July 1 entry about companies trying to circumvent barriers to riding the coattails of the Beijing Olympic Games, straight out of China. The story comes from China Daily (Beijing, China):
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This provides something of a pre-game baseline for awareness of sponsors and non-sponsors alike. I was intrigued to learn that, even among the Chinese, Olympic torch relay sponsor Lenovo got relatively little bounce out of its investment. Also interesting: in the category of sports apparel, the awareness figures for sponsor Adidas and non-sponsor Nike were very close – 34% vs. 29%. In other categories, though, the awareness numbers were much farther apart, possibly because non-sponsors haven’t yet unleashed their ambush or near-ambush marketing efforts.

Also interesting: the confusion between brands and their advertising themes. I was surprised at the high level of consumer confusion, which points to some serious flaws in the creative executions and their relevance to their brands. Proof, once again, that creative irrelevance is, well, irrelevant.
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